Another psalm I have re-write: Psalm 15.
Who, Almighty King, could walk among your hall ways?
Who can be in your Holy place?
The one who walks the narrow path,
Who works towards your will,
Whose language is from your heart,
Whose heart speaks only of you,
Who does not step in the way of a neighbour,
Or any other person.
They do not like those who cause harm,
Or those who do not live for You, Almighty King.
Your people live in your honour, even if it is uncomfortable,
They stick to your truth, Lord.
They share all they have,
And will not be bought or back down.
These are the precepts of your people,
And on this solid foundation they will always stand strong.
(These are my own thoughts, not an original translation)